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bathed in the sky

with our fingers we separated (all) the stars. we found our voices but rejected them- a language made of autumn leaves, the way they get lost after winter sweeps them away. that was our vocal communication, brushed underneath the couch with my chapstick, and your cars keys lost between the cushions. walk around, walk around at night in the lukewarm summer dark. our friends all said my hands were delicate, malnourished on your face, that you most of the time seem confused, and i always look tired. do you remember? it almost escaped me, that memory, hurled into the sk

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i had a flashmy lips slightly parted lets my soul slip out i can see myself in the ground, in the trees, i am everything and everyone, but i can't know them. as i sink deeper i can see your face become closer and you cut my body open like a tight dress to let the beauty and the dirt and the worms in (thank you) every melody was racing in and out of me, cold hands, short fingernails like always, you touch me, i am jolted with weather and memories are these from my lifetime, are you from this lifetime, i feel we float in space gracelessly without time i had a flash
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musicthe wind throws around the leaves and they shimmer like cold coins outside my window and they whisper and that makes me calm inside
a sound tumbles like my mind,
down the staircase i can't see. at the bottom there might be light, ultraviolet, and white, waves of beautiful intangible poetry i cannot write.

just noise - pink static, i can't show it to you, i am just a fish in too deep. music
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the sound et smell of rainfrom inside a wooden house i can imagine the cold coming off the cement below. street streaked, layered differently when the sky decides for change- like a platinum net we are caught in. the sound et smell of rain
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i wrote a song.

Thu Oct 22, 2009, 1:29 PM

yeah, so i wrote a song, then i put it on youtube.

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the lyrics are

i lived on the moon after then
with my tired shadows
reflected from the sun onto a black sea, an ocean
of bio luminescence that showed itself to me
all rainbow and violet white, all rainbow and violet white

i spread my wings as you fly and waves crash over me
i spread my wings as you fly let the waves crash over me
the sky is always changing, the sky is always
changing

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~arwen-rashka Sep 3, 2009, 12:19:04 PM

p.s. i love you

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~forcopeland Jul 10, 2009, 12:31:25 PM

thanks for the fav!

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~LucidZirkus Aug 8, 2008, 6:08:12 PM

thanks,
I appreciate that

~tt-sosani Jun 28, 2008, 3:27:58 AM

Thanks for the fav^^

~arivanna Jul 27, 2007, 8:28:35 PM

thanks for the

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~Destined2Rock Jul 9, 2007, 4:19:39 PM

Thanks for the

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~TeaCupie Jul 1, 2007, 1:52:49 AM

thank you for the fav

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~herr-moriarty Jun 29, 2007, 1:04:56 AM

You have a very interesting writing style. (if you won't take offense) it reminds me a bit of drunk people talking, except with a point to be made. On the whole I'd have to say that your work is much more interesting than the ramblings of the intoxicated, but the analogy still stands.

In any event, I look forward to more.

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~Spock-Rock Jun 29, 2007, 3:24:49 AM

well, i do try. i have been told many, mannnny times that my writing is seriously disjointed. mostly imagery-wise, but i do know that my syntax can be nothing short of shit at times.

i have tried to adopt a more sturdy way of writing--sadly however, i think the "drunk rambling"-esque style has become sort of a trademark of my poetry.

anyway, i'm glad you read through some of this. it is a bit of motivation to actually write something new (and not fall back on old subjects; if you've read a bunch of this you probably noticed some running themes). also thanks for the add.

cheerio

~boy-sets-fire Jun 28, 2007, 10:59:10 PM

thanks for the fave XD
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